Author Steven Clark Bradley

'More Deaths Than One' can Only Adequately Be Described As Superb

stevenbradley | April 22, 2009 15:02

You have got to read this novel
More Deaths Than One


Who has stolen Bob Stark's identity? Why is he being pursued by the henchmen of a shadowy multinational corporation? What does it have to do with his old friends from his brutal days of service in Vietnam? These are but a few of the exquisite and tantalizing questions and scenarios painted and which must be answered in Pat Bertram’s riveting and excellent new novel, More Deaths Than One.

Try to put yourself into Bob Stark’s shoes. Your mother died more than 20 years ago and you actually attended her funeral, at that time. Then, you travel to South East Asia where you end up staying for eighteen years, only to return and discover that your long lost mom has just died again and another you is at her funeral. Sound startling, eerie or suspenseful? Believe me; if you start reading this tremendous read, you will not want to stop until it is completely finished. It is one of the best novels I have read in years.

As a novelist, one of the most important things a writer must do is to grab the reader’s attention, on the first page. Pat Bertram’s novel, More Deaths Than One certainly hooked me immediately. Bertram has a natural talent and has created a story that gets readers deeply into the story and holds them. Her plot and her very realistic characters took my total concentration. The characters are so fascinating, attention-grabbing and human. By the end of the book, I felt as if I knew them well and for a long time. I am convinced that if the reading public learns about this spellbinding new novel, a very large number of people will want to read it and Pat Bertram will have a best seller. I consider her to be one of the smartest writers I have had the pleasure of meeting.

I think we will read a lot more from this excellent storyteller, Pat Bertram. She has stated that when the traditional publishers stopped publishing her favorite type of books that are character and story driven novels, which can’t easily be slotted into a genre, she decided to write her own. She certainly achieved her goal, with More Deaths Than One. The residents of Pat Bertram’s native Colorado, where she is a lifelong resident have much to be proud of, from one of their own. There are many words that come to mind to describe this powerful and suspenseful novel, such as exciting, powerful, suspenseful or mesmerizing. But, without a doubt, the best word I can use to describe More Deaths Than One by Pat Bertram is nothing less than Superb.

Steven Clark Bradley
Author of Patriot Acts Nimrod Rising StillBorn! Probable Cause




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Here’s What Other Readers Have Said

Reviews

“I love the story of More Deaths Than One. Pat Bertram blends mystery/suspense with history very well. Her characters are strong, and I love the slow reveal of who Bob really was/is. The hints and clues Bertram drops come together for me with the jungle nightmares.The descriptions of the places Bob and Kerry visit are exquistely done; the places sound real. I enjoyed this story very much.” Rachael Wollet, freelance editor.


“Wow. I read A Spark of Heavenly Fire twice. The first time for the story, the second for editing. Though I’m not sure I caught much because I got so engrossed in the story…even the second time through. Bertram’s characters are heartbreaking and real. I love Kate. Absolutely love her. The description of everything seems spot on. Sounds much like New Orleans post-Katrina. Bertram clearly did her research on this one. Fabulous.”

Rachael Wollet, freelance editor.


“Full of intriguing dialogue and interesting characters one will not soon forget, “A Spark of Heavenly Fire” is a truly satisfying read I highly recommend. Captivating visuals and an original theme kept me turning the pages at a rapid rate. I look forward to more work from this gifted writer.”

Deborah Ledford, author


“Pat Bertram, author of More Deaths Than One and a Spark of Heavenly Fire, is one of the best of the new crop of writers. Pat’s work is insightful, superbly crafted, and completely involving. I would unhesitatingly recommend her books to anyone who enjoys speculative fiction of the highest order.”

Suzanne Francis, author of the Song of the Arkafina series from Mushroom Ebooks.


In More Deaths Than One, Bertram created two characters I’m ready to watch take off. The combination of Bob and the waitress is great-she’s obviously the one person he’s letting pull him out of whatever shell he’s been in. Bertram raises so many interesting questions in her initial chapter that it definitely compels me to want to read more. Why is Bob in Denver, and where has he ben? Is this a story of timeshifting madness, or what? Why are the police at the funeral? And on and on! Bertram’s writing is also well-crafted and flows so well. The dialog is a strong suit.”

Ann Barks, fellow FCC contestant.


“While we are intrigued and caught up in the absurd story of a man who goes to the second funeral of his mother (long dead) and sees himself (living a life he doesn’t realize he’s lived) and his brother (with a trophy wife young enough to be his daughter), the real clues Bertram leaves us as to what’s going on are to be found in Bob’s perpetual headache, his troubled/troubling art, his mysterious reappearance in his hometown, and the questions asked by the friendly, persistent waitress. Meantime, I enjoy the dialogue, with unique phrasings such as “son of rabid dog”. Denver is an unusual setting that must figure into the story in multiple ways. I enjoyed the rock solid POV, as well as the nice, just-slightly-more-than-minimal descriptions (like the way Bob concealed himself in the lilac bushes or the description of the young couple in the diner). Above all I appreciate the way Bertram builds mystery on several levels into the story. Good job.”

Lazarus Barnhill, author





 

Excerpt

More Deaths Than One by Pat Bertram

Chapter One

This is the first Chapter of More Deaths Than One,
available from
Second Wind Publishing.

Chapter One

“What do you think of a guy who embezzles from his own business?”


Bob Stark recognized the voice of the graveyard shift waitress, the attractive one with the black hair. He glanced up from his contemplation of the scars on the laminated plastic table and saw her standing by his booth, gazing at him, her eyebrows quirked. She seemed to expect a response, but he had no idea what to say. And why would she ask him such a question? Though he’d been coming to Rimrock Coffee Shop for four weeks now, she’d never deviated from her standard lines of “What’ll you have?” and “Here you go.”


He took a surreptitious look around. Except for the two drunks arguing in a corner booth and a cook cleaning the grill in the kitchen, he and the waitress were the only two people in the twenty-four-hour coffee shop.


Beneath the overly long bangs, her dark eyes gleamed, giving him the impression of laughter. “Yes, I am talking to you.”


“I’ll have hot chocolate,” he said, adhering to the unwritten script.


With a flip of her wrist, she brushed the hair off her face. Her skirt flounced as she whirled away from the table, and Bob noticed that she had nicely muscled thighs. Good calves, too. Not wanting her to catch him staring, he picked up a newspaper someone had left behind and leafed through it.


The waitress returned with his beverage. “What would you do if you were a girl who just found out her boyfriend is embezzling from himself?”


Bob stirred his hot chocolate, trying to think of the right response, but nothing came to mind.


“Men!” she said, hurrying off to answer the ringing telephone.


Later, after the drunks had stumbled out into the night, she came back to Bob’s table carrying a cup of coffee for her and another cup of hot chocolate for him.


He raised his palms. “I didn’t order this.”


She sat across from him. “Let’s not quibble over details.” She sipped her coffee, eyes laughing at him over the rim of the cup, then she set the empty cup aside.


Folding her arms on the table, she leaned forward and stared into his face. “What do you have to say for yourself? And who are you? You’ve been coming in here every night, real late, and you never talk except to order hot chocolate.”


She leaned back. “I bet you can’t sleep. That’s why you come, isn’t it? What’s the problem? Bad dreams?”


Bob felt a shudder go through him. He came here to get away from the nightmares, not remember them. He took a gulp of chocolate, grateful for the warmth sliding down his throat.


“You’re a shy one,” she said. “And you never did answer my question.”


He lifted one shoulder in a disinterested shrug. “You asked a lot of questions.”


“The one about the girl finding out that her boyfriend is embezzling from himself.”


“Depends on their relationship. Is she involved in the business?”


“She helped him start it, works in the office during the day, and waits tables at night to pay the rent.”


“Then he’s embezzling from her, too.”


She flicked the hair out of her eyes. “You’re right. God, what a fool I’ve been. Ever since I found out he’s been cheating on his business, I’ve been wondering if he’s been cheating on me. That son of a rabid dog. He promised we’d get a house together as soon as the business did well enough, and it turns out we could have been living in our own place for several months now.”


“Even if he’s not cheating on you physically,” Bob said, “he’s cheated on you morally.”


“I want someone who’s honest and true to himself, someone who likes and respects himself so he can like and respect me. Is that too much to ask?”


The door opened. A young couple entered. Mouths locked together, they slid into a booth and groped beneath each other’s clothes.


The waitress stood. “I better go remind them this isn’t a motel.”


Grateful to be alone, Bob sipped his hot chocolate and read the newspaper.


The Broncos still reeled from their humiliation at the previous Super Bowl, having lost to the Redskins forty-two to ten.


Two youths found a man’s decomposing body in a culvert off the South Platte River. The man had been tortured; the work of a gang, the police surmised.


Silverado faced insolvency, having squandered one hundred million dollars on bad loans.


And Lydia Loretta Stark was dead. Again.

***

“I brought you another hot chocolate. It’s on the house.” The young woman sat and peered at Bob. “Is something wrong? You don’t look so good all of a sudden.”


He tried to ignore the ache inching up the back of his head. “What would you do if you were reading today’s paper and came across the obituary of your mother who’s been buried for twenty-two years?”


She laughed. “Go to the funeral, of course.” She must have realized Bob hadn’t meant to be funny, because the mirth faded from her eyes. “You’re serious?”


“Dead serious.” He showed her the notice.


She read it aloud. ” ‘Lydia Loretta Stark, sixty-six, of Denver, passed away August twenty-ninth, nineteen eighty-eight, at four p.m. Preceded in death by husband Edward Jackson. Survived by sons Edward Jackson, Junior and Robert; six grandchildren. Services and interment Friday, ten a.m., at Mountain View Cemetery.’ ” She looked at him. “Are you Edward or Robert?”


“Robert. My brother is Edward, but he goes by the name of Jackson.”


“What name do you go by?”


“Bob.”


“I’m Kerry. Kerry Casillas.” She eyed the obituary. “How many of those children are yours?


Bob massaged the back of his neck. “None.”


“Jackson’s been a busy boy.”


“Seems like it.”


“You don’t know?”


“I haven’t seen him since my mother’s funeral-the first one, I mean. We never got along.”


She pushed back her hair. “So this is really your mother’s obituary?”


“Could be. She died in nineteen sixty-six at the age of forty-four and had no grandchildren at the time, but everything else matches.”


“If it’s not a coincidence, it must be a hoax.”


Bob shook his head, stopping abruptly when pain shot to the top of his skull. “Why would anyone go through all the trouble of putting a fake obituary in the paper? And who’s being hoaxed? It can’t be me. No one knows I’m in Denver.”

***

On Friday, Bob made the trip to Mountain View Cemetery. He wandered around the lush expanse, skirting formal flower gardens and stepping over white gravestones lying flush with the ground. The place seemed deserted, but as he topped a small rise, he saw a funeral party spread out before him like a stage play.


He paused beside a large clump of lilac bushes and scanned the small crowd encircling the brass-trimmed casket.


Everyone wore black except one young woman, scarcely out of her teens, who had pasted on a skimpy red dress that left no part of her voluptuous figure to the imagination. A much older man had an arm draped around her, his hand cupping her buttocks.


Bob recognized the man: his brother. Jackson had been a good-looking boy, having inherited his father’s athletic build and his mother’s blond beauty. He still looked good, though Bob could see that too many years of hard living or hard drinking had left their mark.


Bob’s headache returned in full force. He closed his eyes and massaged his temples while breathing deeply. When the pain abated, he glanced at the crowd again and noticed two men with the tensed posture of police officers on duty standing off to one side. They seemed familiar, but he couldn’t place them. As if becoming aware of his scrutiny, they turned in his direction.


He stepped closer to the lilac bush, out of their line of vision.


Clustered with their backs to him stood a man, a woman, and six children ranging in age from about two years old to about sixteen. The obituary had mentioned six grandchildren, Bob recalled. Were these six his brother’s offspring, by an ex-wife, perhaps?


One of the children, a pudgy little boy, reached out and yanked the pigtails of the taller, skinnier girl slouching next to him. She slapped him. The next moment they were rolling around on the ground and pummeling each other.


The woman turned around. “Stop it, you two.”


Bob sucked in his breath. Lorena Jones, his college girlfriend? What was she doing here? How did she know these people? He certainly hadn’t introduced her to them.


Feeling dizzy, he studied her while she scolded the children. Deep lines and red splotches marred her once satiny smooth face, and her body appeared bloated, as if she had not bothered to lose the extra weight from her last pregnancy or two. Despite those changes, she looked remarkably like her college picture he still carried in his wallet along with the Dear John letter that had ended their relationship.


Lorena nudged the man next to her. “Robert Stark, don’t just stand there. Do something.”


The man she called Robert Stark turned around to admonish the children.


Bob stared. The other Robert Stark seemed to have aged a bit faster than he, seemed more used, but the resemblance could not be denied. He was looking at himself.


Head aching so much he could scarcely breathe, he stood like stone. Not even his eyes moved as he watched the rest of the ceremony.


When everyone left, he approached the casket. He gazed at it, then turned to walk away. A flash of white caught his attention-the headstone, lying discreetly off to the side, ready to be inset: Lydia Loretta Stark, cherished wife, beloved mother; adored grandmother; born March 10, 1922; died August 29, 1988.


“What the hell is going on?” he asked aloud.


The mild expletive hung in the air until a sudden breeze blew it away...

~~~

Here's another of Pat Bertram's great novels - Check it out too!

A Spark of Heavenly Fire
Pat Bertram
In quarantined Colorado, where hundreds of thousands of people are dying from an unstoppable disease called the red death, insomniac Kate Cummings struggles to find the courage to live and to love. Her new love, investigative reporter Greg Pullman, is determined to discover who unleashed the deadly organism and why they did it, until the cost of Kate's life becomes more than he can pay.

"Wow. I read
A Spark of Heavenly Fire twice. The first time for the story, the second for editing. Though I'm not sure I caught much because I got so engrossed in the story…even the second time through. Bertram's characters are heartbreaking and real. I love Kate. Absolutely love her. The description of everything seems spot on. Sounds much like New Orleans post-Katrina. Bertram clearly did her research on this one. Fabulous." Rachael Wollet, freelance editor.




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Patriot Acts - An Intense, Fast-paced Modern Day Thriller

stevenbradley | April 11, 2009 18:11


Patriot Acts
An Intense, Fast-paced Modern Day Thriller

By Cheryl C. Malandrinos

April 1, 2009 Hidden away in an Alaskan prison, serving time for a crime he never committed, Colonel Fisher Harrison thinks of revenge. His government forsake him and his Special Ops buddies and no one was meant to survive. If Fisher gets out of that hellish place, the man who put him there is going to pay.
But, that man is now President of the United States and seemingly untouchable; until the Islamic Republic of Iran and radical American militia groups join forces, and President Christopher Tate knows that Colonel Harrison is the only man who can stop a planned covert nuclear attack. Will Fisher help the government who forsake him? And if he does, will he make it out alive?


"Patriot Acts" by Steven Clark Bradley is an intense, fast-paced modern day thriller that leaves you clinging to the edge of your seat. Bradley's wealth of experience comes alive in this story of a covert nuclear attack planned by two deadly forces. Having traveled to thirty-four countries and having been a freelance journalist in Iraq, Israel and Turkey, Bradley creates a realistic and scary portrait of potential terrorism issues home and abroad.

Strong and complex characters fill this novel. From Fisher Harrison to Christopher Tate, from radical militia leader Len Garret to Jamie O'Rourke, the President's Chief of Staff, every player is alternately sympathetic and despicable, likable and easily hated. Bradley has done an excellent job of creating multi-faceted characters whose actions move this story along at a fast clip.

 

That said, the overuse of the exclamation point in the dialogue rendered its effect useless, and a good editor may have helped making some of the transitions easier. Since this book travels back and forth in time, the choppy transitions occasionally left this reader with a moment of confusion until she figured out the character was recalling past events.


"Patriot Acts" by Steven Clark Bradley will be a hit with military fiction fans, lovers of fast-paced thrillers, and anyone interested in the War on Terror. This is definitely a book worth checking out.
Cheryl C. Malandrinos

Cheryl C. Malandrinos is the Editor of The Book Connection, a blog focusing on reviews, author interviews, and on hosting virtual book tour guests. She's also a reviewer for The Muse Book Reviews. Cheryl is currently looking for more reviewers to join her blog, especially for those who review ebooks. A virtual book tour coordinator for Pump Up Your Book Promotion, Cheryl sees a bright future for review bloggers and calls the Internet a 'huge promotion playground' for publicists and authors.

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"People do not give up their Freedom. They naturally take it for granted. Since freedom is not granted by any government, we forget, Power and Freedom are always in conflict. Freedom either slinks away like a vapor, we don't know it’s gone till it is no more. Or, it is snatched away from a people too dependent to stand alone. There is no Security without Freedom Don’t know?"
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Patriot Acts 

Today, America faces enemies that make the chilling world of the Cold War seem like much brighter times. The Islamic forces that have declared Jihad on America have caused the greatest threat to the life of the United States since World War II. The novel, "Patriot Acts" is a very original, well-researched and very plausible look into what could happen if the nation of Iran is allowed to become a nuclear power. All of the sites and stats and cultural aspects are true and thoroughly researched. Also, having lived in several Islamic countries, I have a first-hand ability to write about the lifestyles in places like Iran.


The setting of this story takes place in the very near future with allusions into the past from the main characters. The characters are very profoundly developed in the areas of action, dialog and emotion. In Patriot Acts, America finds itself under covert nuclear attack from the Islamic Republic of Iran and the only person who can effectively retaliate against their aggression is Fisher Harrison, the best trained Special Ops killer the military has.


Iran has represented the root of terrorism since 1979 until today. The only problem is that Fisher Harrison is in a federal prison, framed for a murder he did not commit, framed by his former boss, now the President of the United States of America. The plotting in this novel works from the premise that America faces three major challenges.


One problem this story deals with is the growing threat with Iran and its desire to procure nuclear weapons. The next problem is the insecurity that America faces from the border with Mexico. In Patriot Acts, the border easily allows Iranian operatives to infiltrate America. The third situation playing out at the same time in this novel is the threat of American radical militia groups joining hands with radical Islamic terrorists to try to bring down the United States Government.

In the midst of all the upheaval, Fisher Harrison, who is serving a life term in a federal penitentiary, is the only man trained well enough to stop this move against America, but he has a goal of killing President Christopher A. Tate, whom he believes framed him as a killer. The mysterious situation surrounding the murder and the truth of it all in the end makes for tantalizing intrigue especially when mixed in with the terrorist threats facing the country. You will take an amazing journey that will transport you from Alaska to the Midwest and to the heart of the nation of Iran itself as two enemies unite to save the nation. You will be amazed how possible this story is and may inconveniently render the reader afraid in realizing how close to home it could all be!


The main question is whether America is willing to do what is necessary to preserve, protect and defend the constitution of the United States of America? The deeds required and carried out in this story are not acts of terror, not acts of vengeance but in reality, Patriot Acts! Steven Clark Bradley


Excerpt From Patriot Acts

Special Handling


Harrison’s eyes were closed in a drug-induced stupor, but his mind was replaying the day his family abandoned him! He saw it all afresh and looked out over a terrain that was lifeless, and yet there were living crawling things all around him, in the shrubs, in the bald headed trees and all around his feet. Some of the things were insects, others were reptilian but the large majority of them were human. Down the highway of death all about him was the burnt out carnage of a war that was caused by a man set on seizing the Middle East and setting it ablaze and resulting from a President’s lack of resolve to finish a job barely halfway completed. Cars, Trucks, both civilian and military, the carcasses of tanks and men alike were strewn about like God had reached down and picked it all up at once and tossed it into space and let it fall at will! Bodies of men with their limbs blown off were everywhere with the detached limbs of another comrade’s arm, leg or head laying next to them. This highway of madness Fisher Harrison saw so clearly as he looked at the residue of 100 hours of slaughter that had taken Saddam Hussein out of Kuwait. Fisher Harrison lamented, as he knew that his brothers in arms had been removed from their advance to kill the tyrant only to be assured that they’d have to return one day to repeat it all over again, only at a far more wretched price! They were all gone!

Fisher looked over the horizon in every direction to see if even a cloud of smoke could be seen from a retreating Bradley or Abrams. There was nothing! They were gone; all gone except for him! The only remaining American thing he could still see was the chopper he had escaped from death in; the chopper where 7 of his fellow Special Black Ops had not been so lucky. As Fisher took out his long-range viewers the only hint of the war left were thick, black clouds rising into the sky from the incinerated oil wells in Kuwait and the various cars, trucks, and military hardware that had not yet burned themselves out!

Fisher saw movement to his left. He walked over to a car that was burnt beyond recognition. Inside was the dead body of a young Arab girl, about 16. On top of her was an Iraqi soldier still breathing and still inside her where he had been when an exploding shell had impacted close to the car where he had been reviling her. His breathing was shallow and his eyes opened slowly as he regained consciousness and he mumbled!

Allah Wakbar…”

The soldier’s eyes opened and Fisher saw him look down at the girl he had been raping when he had been knocked unconscious. The soldier had not seen Fisher but looked down at the dead girl under him and he started to laugh. It had seemed ironic to him that she had escaped her pain by dying and he had been forced to continue in his by living. The soldier slapped the dead girl across the face and then spat on her just before he pulled himself out of her. He stood up and looked down at the young Iraqi girl, one of his own, and laughed again before turning around to see Colonel Fisher Harrison’s gun staring in his face.

“American! You are American! War over! God bless America! God bless America!”

Fisher kept the gun directly about six inches from the Iraqi’s face and aimed between the Muslim Rapist’s eyes!

“Thank you, God always blesses America! Give your Allah my regards!”

Fisher squeezed the trigger and the Iraqi’s face exploded before Fisher’s eyes!
Fisher Harrison didn’t flinch! Killing was his job. It was what he did without the slightest increase in his pulse.

He heard a sudden sound of rotors twirling and saw the tornado-like affect of a Black Hawk heading his way and stirring up the desert floor. He looked straight ahead of him and up and saw a chopper and his heartbeat picked up speed when he thought of his brethren coming to take him out of this field of twisted metal, war-ravaged breathless faces and smoldering death!

The chopper continued its approach and then the pilot and his Ordinance Specialist saw Fisher! The chopper flew toward him and hovered overhead. Fisher started waving his arms until he saw the expression on the pilot and Or. Spec’s faces. Fisher then just stood there under the chopper holding his hands up with sand and debris being propelled all around him and in him realizing they had not come to rescue him but to kill him, to get him out of the way!

Fisher stared into their faces less than one hundred feet above him with a huge caliber round staring back at him. The pilot could not take his eyes off Fisher! Fisher was sure he had seen tears run down both of their faces! Fisher too had the same sort of eyes looking back at them pleading with them to take their brother home!

Fisher turned his back to them and fell to his knees and looked at the death all around him. He raised his arms and cried out!

“Who are we? What have we become? What can we defend?”

This was a case of ‘Special Handling’! Perhaps his own brothers would make him one with his dead comrades, but if so it would be a shot in the back! Why would he bravely take a bullet to the forehead when the nation he had so bravely fought for was about to so cowardly make him disappear?

The pilot just hung there in the air and Fisher resolved himself to his fate and knew there would be justice, even if not in this life! Fisher finally turned around and looked up at the two soldiers hanging in the metal whirling bird hanging not so far above him. He saw the pilot lean over and say something to his Or. Spec. Then the Or. Spec held a radio like the one Fisher had at his side. He flashed Fisher four fingers and Fisher turned the radio to channel four and could now hear all communications between the chopper and base camp. The chopper maneuvered about ten feet to the right of Fisher.

Inside the cockpit, Kuwait command enquired of the soldiers’ mission.

“Have you located the target?”

“That’s affirmative! Target in sight, Sir.”

“Execute then for God sake!”

“Roger that! Executing now sir!”

Then the chopper that had moved away from Fisher loaded its gun and the Or. Spec stuck his head out of the craft and Fisher saw him very plainly and clearly! Fisher had told himself he would never forget his face, but he eventually would. The Or. Spec waved at Fisher to get down on the ground. Fisher concurred and the Or. Spec fired off fifteen rounds just to Fisher’s right. Fisher knew they had missed and knew they had chosen to miss!

The chopper then maneuvered direct over top of Fisher and the Or. Spec took a large plastic bag full of blood and dropped it down from the chopper so it would fall directly on Fisher whose body was still splayed out flatly in the corrupted sand of the Highway of Hell! It busted open on impact! The Or. Spec then took a camera and shot several photos of Fisher lying there, apparently dead! The Or. Spec then looked down at Fisher and Fisher looked up and the soldiers above who had placed their right extended fingers to their foreheads and saluted Colonel Fisher Harrison!

"Kuwait Command, this is Merciless One”

“Merciless one? That is not your call sign.”

“Target is down! I repeat target is down!”

“Do you have verification?”

“That’s affirmative, Sir and we have just killed one of our own and have earned any call sign we chose!”

“You are to maintain radio darkness!”

“Sir, after we get this bird safely to her nest, consider the both of us as having resigned our commissions and never fly for this force again! And you can then take your darkness and stick it up your ass! Sir! Merciless One, over and out!”

“Come in Mercy One, Mercy One, do you read me...?”

The chopper lifted high into the sky and flew away! Fisher saw it leaving, growing smaller and then vanish! Fisher rolled over on his back and looked straight up and screamed!

“What have we become!?” and his eyes forced themselves open!




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Part Three Brothers at War - Inside Ramallah

stevenbradley | April 07, 2009 08:23


Part Three Brothers at War - Inside Ramallah

"Only the dead have
seen an end of war."
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I struggle with just how to paint the picture, which is permanently imprinted in my mind, of the fractured society that several minor and major Middle-Eastern wars have created.


I can also never forget writing the final chapters of Nimrod Rising. That was the other time that such a feeling of inadequacy had come over me, until I finally conjured up the appropriate images and then it flowed out of me.


Depicting the great and final battle of Armageddon. and the utter destruction that will result, is a humbling and heart-rending mission. I was right there, the battle ground where the bowl of vicious evil will be ultimately filled and where the final clash of kinship, a collision of cultures and memories of loss in deadly battles, already fought; all done in the name of their God. I was standing on the very ground and writing this expose.

The first two articles already gave you a taste of this very profound novel, Nimrod Rising. These ancient societies have come down to our day and the long awaited battle shall follow suit. This is as real as it gets.

Waiting to enter Ramallah, at the Qualandiya checkpoint, told me that I was very much alive, and hoped to remain as such. War was all around me, at least the remains of a war that had taken a breather, giving me time to get in and to get back out. Yet, walking up to a soldier in full battlefield gear without being nervous is impossible. I found that the best approach was complete honesty.


When my turn came, I produced my passport with a picture that no longer looked so much like me and handed it to the soldier standing guard at the Qualandiya checkpoint. It looked official enough, I thought. I turned out to be right and entered without difficulty. I entered the city of Ramallah wondering if all the humiliation was needed. I finally concluded that is was.


I love the Jewish people, and I believe I let them know that. They are an amazing people with some of the greatest minds in history, to their credit. They have taken the desert and made it to blossom and is one of the few places in the world bananas grow in the desert. Still, what I would soon see inside Ramallah would have a big impact on me. There could be no accurate recounting of the situation without seeing the other side of the story. It would teach me how rich in culture and life both the Jews and the Palestinians are.


By the time Mr. Toubassi arrived, I was very happy to ride rather than walk in the embattled streets of Ramallah, with live fire all around us. Ramallah is by no means small nor insignificant. Before the founding of the State of Israel, the British had used this teaming city as a resort, during their rule, because of its moderate temperatures. Today, it is a teeming city, with sections which lay in complete ruins.

I started my journey at about 10:00 AM. I had found a good contact with the President of the Palestinian Journalists Syndicate, Mr. Naim Toubassi. He was not sure that I would make it through the checkpoint at Qualandiya, but if I could, he promised to meet me, when I arrived. I did not know Mr. Toubassi, but I had been assured that he was a reliable man, and it turned out to be completely true.

Journalism is a very dangerous profession for Palestinians, in the occupied territories. Mr. Toubassi, himself, has paid a price for his love of his people. He has spent as much as seventeen months in jail without charges for his role in reporting the incursions into the West Bank in three of his newspapers. Once he was released for one day and night and was rearrested the next day. He has preached peace and an end to the suicide bombings, but his pleas have fallen on deaf ears, due to the continued intransigence of the Israeli government, according to Mr. Toubassi. He pointed out that his credibility is threatened and he feared that the violence will only increase as his fellow Palestinians see no reason to push for a peace that they feel offers them nothing but the same.

Mr. Toubassi pointed out to me that fourteen Palestinian journalists had been killed and over 70 wounded by Israeli forces. In addition, nine journalists are still held in detention by Israel's military. Shimon Peres himself has stated that war does not mean only a rifle and a gun, but also a camera. We were given evidence of this statement when we visited the bombed out headquarters of the Palestinian Broadcasting Company.

During the massive incursion in Ramallah, the Israel army had systematically placed dynamite throughout the building and blew it up along with all the equipment, which had been purchased with American and United Nations' funds. It seemed a bit like killing a bug with a sledge hammer, but Israel's justification was that such media sources only encouraged and glorified the suicide attackers and their families as heroes of the Palestinian cause.

A Palestinian reporter asked me, "How do you feel about having your American tax dollars to fund such death and destruction." He was making reference to the two billion dollars in American funds sent to Israel for their defense. The same argument is used by Jewish citizens of Israel that the funds handed over to Arafat by the Clinton and Bush administrations after Oslo to build a security force have allegedly been used to purchase explosives for the attacks that have rocked Israel's civilian population.

As I sat down for lunch with Mr. Toubassi, I spoke little and listened a lot. His words were profound and pertinent. "Who is the power holder in this region? It is certainly not the Palestinians. It is Israel who has the soldiers, the tanks, the Apache helicopters and the bomb itself. What have we got? Our people have the guns the Israelis gave us after Oslo which are small. We have our rocks and our bodies. When a young boy here has lost his mother, father and his brothers and sisters, what does he have left to do? He feels he has no reason to live and he wishes to give back to his family's killers what they had given to him, so he blows himself up. America and Israel tells us to arrest our terrorists, but the jails are all destroyed so where will we put them? Give us our land and we will rebuild our security and the bombing will stop. Everyone knows, except America and Israel that peace under these terms is the only thing that will work. I promise you that then we will live side by side and have a mutually beneficial relationship. Until then, our calls for an end to the bombing will fall on deaf ears."

To say the least, this region is at the point of change, simply by virtue of the fact that no society can maintain such dire conditions indefinitely. Either the troubled area of the world will find a negotiating posture that both sides can agree to or violence will only increase and a complete obliteration of both sides will result. America has stepped up its role as an honest broker that appears to be trying to find a process which sees the causes and reasons for the violence on both sides.

The truth of the matter that I have been able to ascertain is that the despair and dire lack of hope of the Palestinians cries out on every street. It is not enough to state that this land belongs to Israel. Both groups of people are out of options. There are no resources or political contacts that have sufficiently revealed that the only solution truly is peace. Perhaps what type of peace and how to achieve it is still up for grabs, but there have not been enough serious exchanges that could ever hope to lead anywhere accept to more hatred, more bombing of innocent lives and more death on both sides. It seems clear that the time has come to call the bluff of the leaders of both sides and to see if it is peace or power that is truly desired by either side. Politics is by nature a self-serving affair. The only way to reveal the motives of the two enemies is by challenging both sides to sacrifice and make room for new leadership. The fact is that who ever becomes the next leader of the Palestinians will have to take the terrorist factions by their throats and crush them. Otherwise, any future leader will remain hostage to groups that cannot even fathom any future Palestinian state next to a State of Israel. Constitutions and political and judicial institutions will be of no effect and any leader will have no power to rule if they are not reigned in. It is only logical that if a new, democratic state can be achieved, the first threat to peace will be Hamas, Fatah, Islamic Jihad, Hezbollah, The Allah Aksa Martyrs Brigade and any of the various other splinter groups of which Hezbollah is armed to the teeth by Iran which exercises far wider influence in Middle-East violence than anyone cares to admit.

This became evident just over one year ago when the world was shocked by Hezbollah's ability to unceasingly lob their missiles into Israel. A future Palestinian leader will likely face a greater threat to regional peace from groups such as these which come from his own people than from Israel. Hamas has only lately made that clear. Indeed, it will be vital for a new Palestinian government to immediately develop strong relations with the State of Israel.


In fact, to accomplish what will be needed to establish a viable, legitimate Palestinian State, it will be vital that the terrorist groups be forced to turn on any newly elected government that was installed by the people of Palestine. This will break their public support. Money, guns and bombs cannot long live when the will of the people has been repudiated. A Hamas-led government would never outlaw terror, for it would be political suicide, since Terror is their raison D'etre.

If a new leader is willing to do the required tasks to rule, then it would not even be inconceivable to see Palestinian and Israeli troops fighting together to weed out the terrorist culture out of the Middle East. Such a situation would be mutually beneficial to both sides of the present conflict. Yet, it would be naive to expect such a direct demand by President Bush to be accepted at face value. It was clear to me that a large percent of Palestinians desire different leadership and peace and cooperation with Israel.

Never has the peacemaking role been so vital and never will there be another opportunity such as now. Hamas and Fatah are in a war of their own now. At the first bombing I witnessed in Israel, I spent a good deal of time taking it all in. I found it impossible to absorb entirely. A great feeling of guilt came over me and I did not want to take pictures, but their stories had to be told. When I was making my way out of the scene a long black bearded Jewish man came up to me. He had refused to cry, but his eyes were reddened. "We should have pushed them all out a long time ago. It is not that I hate Arabs or Palestinians, specifically, but Israel is for the Jew." The problem is that the day of Peres and the day of Prime Minister Sharon are over and there seems to be a leadership gap now in the Jewish state. The current leadership seems not to know that there will be no peace until they get rid of the killers? That is not so surprising since the world’s only super power has also missed the boat in that regard.

The Palestinian People and their Culture

A prayer for the State of Israel

Nobody can rightly say that Israel is unjustified in defending its citizens from the indiscriminate murder of its children and families. Christ said that anyone who harms a child would have a great millstone placed around their necks and be cast into the deepest sea. If this is the case, neither side will be able to escape judgment. Both are guilty of a lack of mercy and a sense of justice. Nevertheless, these two peoples are at war. It is a gang war of sorts and ground zero of the clash of personalities. What I saw and experienced in the home of the Intifada and in the middle of the Promised Land were these two peoples, both brothers, both with the same blood from the same father coursing through their veins and they are both deserving of a time of peace and hopeful of a future standing down and a cease to the hostilities. The world now waits to see if peace is truly desired or achievable in this sacred land. No one is sure of what President Obama truly desires to do in the Middle east today. He has been letting his goals disseminate piecemeal. What is sure is that in the future, once again stained with blood that runs in the veins of two peoples who are more alike than they would care to admit will again flow in the streets of the Holy Land, and it is understandable, they are brothers at war.














Steven Clark Bradley lived abroad for over 17 years and has been to 34 countries, including Pakistan, Iraq and Turkey. Hehas a master's degree in liberal studies from Indiana University. He speaks French and Turkish. He has been an assistant to a prosecutor, a university instructor and a freelance journalist in Ramallah, Palistine, Israel, Turkey, Iraq and Pakistan. Steven is the author of threenovels, Nimrod Rising, Probable Cause and Stillborn!




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